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The sun gives way to the dark and menacing storm clouds. You look up wearily, hoping to find somewhere to stay to avoid the upcoming storm. All around you are trees of all kind. You can identify a few of them, though in these conditions, you do not have the heart to.
Taking a random guess, you choose to go to your right, where there seems to be less bracken. Out of the distance, you suddenly hear pawsteps. Curious and suspicious, you stop and listen intently. Whoever it is is heading your way. Not knowing if you should be cautious or not, you decide to hide behind a tree.
The creature comes into view. It is only a friendly-looking hedgehog. Satisfied, you step out, though still cautiously. The hedgehog seems surprised to see you, though he finally smiles and extends his paw.
"Hello there, I am a creature from Redwall." You quiver with excitement. You have heard of many tales telling of the famous Abbey, and would do much to go there right now.
The hedgehog's smile widens, as if he can read what you're thinking. "You may if you want stay for the night, there's a terrible storm to be expected tonight. Come with me." He leads you across a bend, and you gasp in awe as the magnificent Abbey looms over you. The hedgehog smiles again.
"Welcome to Redwall Abbey, mate."
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Rhian Swiftsabre « Thread Started on Jun 4, 2009, 3:23pm »
|NAME| Rhian Greeneye Swiftsabre
|SPECIES| Golden fox
|ALLIANCE| Good
|PERSONALITY| Rhian is a calm, cool-headed fox. To friends, she will be ever loyal to them, and respect them. To enemies, she will be disdainful, and kill them if they have hurt a friend of hers. She has a crush on a certain fox...Blade!! Around creatures she doesn't know, she is a little shy, and tries her best to be polite. In battle, she is fearless, because she knows dying is just a part of life, and if she did die, she'd rather die on the battlefield than die of old age.
|APPEARANCE| Rhian is an impressive, golden furred fox. She has cunning green eyes, and no white tip to her tail. She wears a short, thick black tunick, with a black eelskin belt around her middle. She has eight daggers on her belt, all of different sizes and kinds. On the front of her belt she keeps her sabre, in an elabourately decorated sheath. Her sabre handle is decorated with tiny bits of rubies and emeralds. |HISTORY| Rhian was born to a black fox and a grey one. Her parents were no different form ordiary vermin: cruel and evil. But when they were killed and Rhian captured as a little babe because of her strange colouring, something stirred inside her tiny heart. By the vermin who had capured her, Rhian was constantly kicked, picked on and beaten because she was an easy target. One day, though, a smart-looking sabre carrying hare came along and freed her, and from that day on, they treated eachother as father and daughter. When she got older, he taught her how to wield a sabre, and in his old age, he presented Rhian with his own beautifu sabre. The pair travled to Salamandastron, where her adopted father decided to spend his remaining seasons, and Rhian was made eight daggers by the Lord of Salamandastorn. She returned to Mossflower, and joined Ripjaw's horde, and found out that she was not the only sheep in wolf's clothing (if you catch my drift!)
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Re: Rhian Swiftsabre « Reply #1 on Jun 10, 2009, 11:56am »
Could you might go a bit more in dept with the personality and appearance? Like what does Rhian usually wear or what does she act like around new creatures. And could you add a history? Thanks.